I say some one needs to take the idea and make it better. Then add the ending part to it.
That way... we can all enjoy something that doesn't suck and sound like barfing into my ears.
I didn't get a laugh at it. Although the ending was interesting. If the rest was better than I am sure I would have laughed my freak'n head off. EPIC FAIL! REJECTED! DOWN-GRADED!
Try another crack at it... in the years to come...